Group Poem with Dark Twist Theme

This is one of the poems we wrote this morning. What do you think?

                   Sunshine

Sunshine warms wet flowing blades of grass

Ghostly white flowers bloom

Birds sing Halleluiah, bees whisper

       People burn

                  No concern

Haze falls on a nuclear wasteland

Stems are cut, draped on stones

Bruised beaks squawk, insects fall